“Whether” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
WhetherThis words can be replaced with:willshallbe going to
shouldThis words can be replaced with:admissible
allowedThis words can be replaced with:a number of
SomeThis words can be replaced with:willshallbe going to
shouldThis words can be replaced with:admissible
allowedPersonally
, I This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agreeHistory has shown that women are
fully
capable of performing well in the military. Historically
, there were a host of valiant women soldiers whose achievements really
put their male counterparts to shame. One need This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
onlyThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
seeexceptionally
women could perform on the battlefield. In my observation, their determination, courage, and dignity, to this day, arc still
being admired
by male soldiers and civilians alike throughout the world.Moreover
, from an enlightened standpoint, female patriots This words can be replaced with:willshallbe going to
shouldbe granted
the right to go to the front line when their motherland is involved
in a war. Admittedly
, gender inequality was a highly
controversial issue in the twentieth century. However
, This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
nowThis words can be replaced with:merely
justThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
menIn sum, keeping military services out of bounds of women in the information age
is unwarranted
. I have been convinced
that it is in the best interest of a nation if women are also
granted equal rights in this particular arena.