Experts throughout both the developing and developed world have debated whether the advent of sophisticated modern technology such as mobile phones, laptops and iPad have to enhance and 's social or whether the opposite has become the case.
On the one hand there is ample, powerful, almost daily evidence that such technology can be detrimental by and which can result in people feeling more isolated from the society.
The central reason behind this is twofold, crucial face-to-face interactions of these appealing and attractive mediums, people feel in touch and connected and the ability to communicate.
that these technology advancements have decreased and diminished our real life interactions.
advantages cannot the popularity of technology such as cellphones people to connect
are able to share any type of news, information, photos and opinions with their ones whenever and wherever they want applications like and WhatsApp to chat with their families, are less likely to experience loneliness and feel out of the loop than those who do not.
Consistent with this line of thinking is that businessmen are
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