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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience Write at least 250 words

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some
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own
home
rather
than rent for it. This essay will
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some
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positive
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keep
a space for themselves.

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First of all
, private home provides piece of life without worrying.
For instance
if one has a permanent place to
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when they face shortage of money, they spend it on other life supplies
instead
of paying rent.
However
,
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some
people prefer to borrow flat for short time as they like
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changes
in their lifetime.
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it requires
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some
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risks
.

The second reason is that in
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the price of apartments is quite high and people who have
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own
home have
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good
status among society,
in addition
to that they
are considered
as rich people
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because
the price of a home rises
gradually
year by year.

On the other hand the other part of citizens believe owning home in such cities is
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use
of money they have.
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they prefer to invest in business
instead
. In the consequence the cost of rent they pay for increases
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due to having not a permanent place to business or to
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live
.

In conclusion
, although people spend money on doing business, if they have not
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own
flat they
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have to
pay for rent much more from the considerable part of income they earned. It
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