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More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern life style which cannot be treated with modern medicines. To what extend do you agree?

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consider that innovations in medicines should not tackle
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approaches of traditional medicine.
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, new technologies in treatment
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lucrative like orthodox medicine on the therapy of illnesses, which
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of modern life style. This essay will argue that, traditional health care can resolve issues in
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Firstly
, the majority dissimilarity between orthodox
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and modern ways in treatment is approach. The conventional medicine focus on
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emergent methods in health care, which target on specific issue.
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back, high blood pressure, tiredness, etc. All cases mentioned above
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On the other hand
, an opportunity to medicate each
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life style
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distinguish the crucial and obvious health's problems for treatment by modern medical approach, the specialist like the high qualified doctor
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evaluate the level of challenges and advantages with disadvantages of future treatment.
In this case
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doctors face to essential poser, that each sickness is not applicable under new medical technologies. Unfortunately, modern treatment does not
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for health care of organism's sensation in whole.

To conclude
, the traditional medicine
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treatment of illnesses, which
were spread
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