The bar graph depicts the transition in number of youngsters who want to pursue higher education. The graph not compares the data after a period of five years a comparison among four countries
On the data country B. In the year 2000, country D had the highest percentage of enrollments 64% and it has remained at the peak for 10 years with 80% enrollments in the year 2010. A similar trend can 2000 it made an approximate 10⁰% leap every time year to reach 62% in 2010.
Moving forward it can be that, the progress of country B and country C hovers around 40% to 50%. There is slight dip in the percentage from 2000 to 2005 for country B, from 46% to 41%. This fall in admission did not from its all-time low in the country C tiny progress of 6% from year 2000 to 2005 remained steady at 52% till 2010.
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A, B, C, and D.Overall
, it is visible that, the younger generation these countries are more inclined towards gaining higher educationOn
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, an upsurge in the student admission in higher education can be noticed
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